Oct 04 2008
Adding Details To Your Story
When it comes to great creative writing, everything comes down to the fine details. The difference between a good story and a great story are all the tidbits of information that your brain takes in that you may not even realize. It’s those little bits of extra information that make your story pop.
For instance, say you’re writing a story about a young woman in a short skirt. You could very well tell your readers “…he couldn’t help but notice her in that mini skirt…”, or you can add a few details that will grab your readers attention, “…he couldn’t help but notice her in that black leather mini skirt…”. It’s not much, but it gives the reader a visual enhancement.
This little trick can be added to any type of writing style. However, you’ve got to be careful not to add too much detail. It is possible to add more to the story than is needed. There is a fine line between adding a few details, and overdoing the details. If you’re scene becomes too overwhelming, you could end up losing your readers.
The best way to decide if you’ve enough or too much detail is by reading your story out loud. If it sounds a bit boring, add some details. If it sounds to cluttered, take a few out. It’s really just that simple. It’s amazing what a few minor details can do for your story.
